Hubris: Book One Demo
HUBRIS
Hubris is rated 16+ due to violence and mature topics.
“You would be the one. I knew it from the moment I first saw you among all the others begging for my guidance. You would be the one to see the world until its end. Battles will be fought, wars will begin and end but you will remain through it all. Other champions will compete in the temples but none shall be more favoured by the gods than you.
You are everything.
You will be glorious.”
Becoming a champion was one of the greatest honours that could be bestowed on a warrior. Many trained for decades, some even from birth and still failed to be noticed by a mentor.
Champions would fight in the temples for the honour of the gods. To prove themselves worthy of their love and charity. Their name would be known throughout the realm.
You have been trained since the age of thirteen for this honour by your ruthless mentor. There is not a single other competitor your age who stands a chance against you, well not anymore.
There was no room for error in the eyes of your tutor but it was only so long before you were bound to make a mistake.
You were cracking and you knew it.
Features:
- Romance the Golden Warrior (They are gender customisable as either male or female and depending on which one you pick it will change parts of the story and bits of their personality so they’re basically like 2 ROs.)
- Customisable appearance, pronouns and personality.
- Choose your Champion’s fighting style.
- Experience how your Champion’s actions impact the realm and the people who follow them.
- Will you be the saviour or drag you and your country down to the deepest pits of damnation?
This is my first IF game so go easy on me guys 😭
Word count (Without code)-
Chapter one: 16.5k
Chapter two: 28.3k
Links to my social media
Tumblr: https://hubris-the-if-game.tumblr.com
Pinterest: https://www.pinterest.co.uk/hubristhegame/hubris-characters/
Spotify: https://open.spotify.com/user/hiq18tkrr7bsw142apc2x2cd
Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/user/membership?u=133610585
Update Log:
Chapter 1- 3rd July 2024
Chapter 2- 10th November 2024
Comments
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I kinda hate my mc lol
like just help valentine dude and be nicer you dont need to be so mean, she helped you after all
dw in chapter 3 there will be a lot more opportunities for your mc grow in terms of how they feel about Valentine 🤭
I really love the demo, But i got a problem idk why but the game doesn't make me play chapter 2 ,i tried to restart it but still doesnt make me go after you go to the inn
Yep sorry it just slipped my mind to change the passage links between the end of chapter one and the start of chapter two 😭. All sorted now though!!
Now it works! but got an error called "scene 1 chapter 2 does not exist" after meeting with mycha and kane and nothing after that 😅
I'm so sorry 😭 fixed it now!
Interesting start! Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Just letting you know there is a lot of tense shifting in the writing. Once it was even within the same sentence.
Yeah I've been finding it quite hard especially since I was deliberating whether to write in past or present tense especially since it's in 2nd person. I'll go back and edit it when I upload for Chapter 2 but if you know any AI tense checkers or anything I would be very thankful. Thanks for letting me know :)
i am shaking and breathing heavily for a crumb of an update
might be a while sorry I'm going on holiday soon! If your not already on there you can join my tumblr for occasional updates :) Here's the link: https://hubris-the-if-game.tumblr.com
I ALREADY WANT MORE!!!
Very interesting! Can't wait for more!
By god i love this already. 😭😭😭😭
Oh boy oh boy. I waited so long for this