Yeah I've been finding it quite hard especially since I was deliberating whether to write in past or present tense especially since it's in 2nd person. I'll go back and edit it when I upload for Chapter 2 but if you know any AI tense checkers or anything I would be very thankful. Thanks for letting me know :)
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Interesting start! Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Just letting you know there is a lot of tense shifting in the writing. Once it was even within the same sentence.
Yeah I've been finding it quite hard especially since I was deliberating whether to write in past or present tense especially since it's in 2nd person. I'll go back and edit it when I upload for Chapter 2 but if you know any AI tense checkers or anything I would be very thankful. Thanks for letting me know :)
i am shaking and breathing heavily for a crumb of an update
might be a while sorry I'm going on holiday soon! If your not already on there you can join my tumblr for occasional updates :) Here's the link: https://hubris-the-if-game.tumblr.com
I ALREADY WANT MORE!!!
Very interesting! Can't wait for more!
By god i love this already. 😭😭😭😭
Oh boy oh boy. I waited so long for this