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I kinda hate my mc lol

like just help valentine dude and be nicer you dont need to be so mean, she helped you after all

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dw in chapter 3 there will be a lot more opportunities for your mc grow in terms of how they feel about Valentine ๐Ÿคญ

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I really love the demo, But i got a problem idk why but the game doesn't make me play chapter 2 ,i tried to restart it but still doesnt make me go after you go to the inn

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Yep sorry it just slipped my mind to change the passage links between the end of chapter one and the start of chapter two ๐Ÿ˜ญ. All sorted now though!!

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Now it works! but got an error called "scene 1 chapter 2 does not exist" after meeting with mycha and kane and nothing after that ๐Ÿ˜…

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I'm so sorry ๐Ÿ˜ญ fixed it now!

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Interesting start!  Looking forward to seeing where this goes!

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Just letting you know there is a lot of tense shifting in the writing. Once it was even within the same sentence.

Yeah I've been finding it quite hard especially since I was deliberating whether to write in past or present tense especially since it's in 2nd person. I'll go back and edit it when I upload for Chapter 2 but if you know any AI tense checkers or anything I would be very thankful. Thanks for letting me know :)

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i am shaking and breathing heavily for a crumb of an update

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might be a while sorry I'm going on holiday soon! If your not already on there you can join my tumblr for occasional updates :) Here's the link: https://hubris-the-if-game.tumblr.com

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I ALREADY WANT MORE!!!

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Very interesting! Can't wait for more!

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By god i love this already. ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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Oh boy oh boy. I waited so long for this